Developed editorial

I have been working on developing my final editorial piece in line with the feedback that I received from David.

The feedback that I received was:

  • The body feels too tight on screen
  • There are some rivers
  • The images are strong but spread 2 and 3 feel too repetitive
  • The text blocks are very heavy on the page
  • Using too many typefaces for the callouts

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